My body shudders with macabre erotic loathes
watching her shredded, torn on the floor
legs broken from the force of my entry,
delicious cries infuses my senses
but still her disgusting, ageless spirit wants more
so I torture and slice her, to her call
'beast of my lustful grotesque,
fuck me until in blood I'm wet
take me more with dark yearning
feed on my evilness and decadent burning'
Into her sickness I'm falling...
Author notes
god help my Karma!
http://rainbowstitches.deviantart.com/art/All-in-the-Past-74611909 for pic credit
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good
this is really good, really emotional..
you have have much talent
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So emotional, there is nothing offensive about feelings my friend.
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sorry
would like to say sorry to anyone who comes across this, if it offends you, please accept my apologises
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