If I could catch a ra in bo w
I would do it just for you.
And share with you it's beauty
On the days you're feeling blue.
If I could build a mountain
You could call your very own.
A place to find serenity
A place to be alone.
If I could take your troubles
I would toss them in the sea.
But all these things I'm finding
are impossible for me,
I cannot build a mountain
Or catch a rainbow fair
But let me be...what I know best,
a friend that's always there.
Author notes
Option Three: The Emotions.
:Love. This one can be about any kind of love (family, friends, etc.), but I will warn you that I don't like to read romantic poetry. You can enter one if you want, but I can't promise that I'll like it.
A contest entry
- & all I ask, is for your best-- by Kiss the girl--x.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - And Then There Were None... by Memoirs of a Girl.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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A very touching friendship poem =]
Friendship is truly a valuable thing. Although the poem itself is very sweet, I just don't feel any sort of emotion from it. It seems very bland to me. You have to believe what you're writing!
Thanks for entering.
~Memoirs
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Yep thanks for the comment...ill remember that!!
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this is so so pretty,
and the picture goes with it perfectly.
thanks for entering
♥
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
This is beautifully written. It's sentiments are superb and strong. It's richness is powerful and it's meaning is priceless. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
you know how beautiful this sounds.. Very poetic and just like a bundle of flowers wrapped with wishes.. So very nice.. Very good work.. and o keep it up and post such enchanting writes here..
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This is honestly the best you have ever written. Incredible! I think it is so great. I wish i could rhyme like this. Very well done.
Dani.
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