'How'd I let you slip away
when forever I wanted to hold you
now I'd die for one more day
there's something I should of told you,
when I looked into your eye's...'
Why does this seem so hard
when day by day I still see you,
that should be enough
but it don't seem right,
that we have to go on pretending.
There come's a point that I want to hold you
but feel that I should die,
because my soul
won't rest your love.
My love, I'm addicted to your touch,
your anger toward's me
you tell me to leave,
when all I wanna do is hold you,
hold you tight,
I beg you please,
please dont slip away from my life.
I haven't said everything I wanted to say to you,
I haven't told you all my fears
This is only because you told me
I had all these years.
Now I die for one more day
I wish I could hold you.
All the thing's I should of say
But time slipped away.
There's something I should of told you,
when I looked into your eye's...
Oh how to tell you your my desire.
Author notes
"How'd I let you slip away when I'm longing so to hold you? Now I'd die for one more day, 'cause there's something I should have told you... when I looked into your eyes"
A contest entry
- Quotes from RENT!! by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I love this poem! There is so much beautiful emotion in it. Good luck in the contest and keep up the great writing!
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WOW I love this!! You've worked the quote into the poem beautifully, and it feels as though it belongs there (rather than the quote feeling separate from the rest of the poem). WELL DONE and good luck!!
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