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Scars

Nothing remains in the past,
It is so easy to cut,
Ease the pain of life,
The scars will always remain

The last time felt like the final,
More promises made
to myself and others,
Promises made to be broken

Each cut deeper than the last,
Every sweep of the blade
brings with it an ecstacy,
A freedom, an escape

One day I will cut too deep,
Lie bleeding in peace
Waiting

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  • buffsab99
    November 11, 2008
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    Excellent

    You have wrote this one so well, it comes right from the soul. Best of luck to you