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Alone

Missing image

Alone in a blue horizon
where footsteps walk no more
thoughts of love abandoned
lie naked on the shore.

Endless thoughts of ended dreams
vanish from my sight
as I walk inside a teardrop
my eyes accept the night.

On a bridge between two hearbeats
forgotten feelings stand
turning back the pages
of a story never planned.

I walk the life before me
to a destiny unknown
lost in blue horizon’s
searching, yet alone.



                     

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Great take on the picture prompt. Beautifully penned and well written. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Nom de Plume
    November 23, 2008
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    beautiful write... really like this.. surprised if this doesnt trophy. "on a bridge between two heartbeats" fantastic line