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Like the Wind

I am like the wind
Unseen but heard.
I move those that are weak
But passes through those that are strong.
I travel the distance no man would undertake
But I have no goal to which I follow.
You can hear my cry
But can you see my suffering?
I am like the wind
Unseen but heard.

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  • FaerieDust9213
    November 13, 2008
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    lovely poem

  • Ken-Maverick
    November 11, 2008
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    Very nice write,
    much enjoyed

  • raspberry Greeters member
    November 11, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    So the wind is speaking here.. Very well written. Thought out very different though.. Do keep writing more and let the inspiration grow!!