She stands atop a boulder,
Her ivory hair aflow,
Stark black dress wavering,
In the howling winds below
The knarled branches,
outstretched to her,
Eager to wrap themselves,
Hungered for lure
The wild winds torment her,
Come with us, they cry,
But she stands still ground,
Dug so deep that none could pry
Then times comes still,
The air becomes tense,
Not a rustle nor twitter is heard,
waiting for something quite immense
She picks up her violin,
tucked under her chin,
Pale fingers, grasping her bow,
Aligned with velvet linen
The winds die down,
The world becomes silent,
To hear her play,
Her sad piece lucent
A small smile creeps up her face,
but only to hide the pain
A thin sheet of glass,
threatening to shatter and rain
Beneath the sham visage,
Dwells the agony inside,
slowing turning her heart
Black as ink abide
No more tears left to shed,
No more words left to speak
She laughs at her foolishness,
She couldn't be weak
The bow strides on,
spinning sad tales,
which she had to endure,
With tears and wailes
No one had heard her,
None bothered to console,
her broken and shattered heart,
Now a black and hated soul
She plays forever on,
THe smile still played on her face,
A small glistening tear,
Soon dissappeared without trace
A contest entry
- Picture Quickie by piccola.
400 points, ended November 11, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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wow. there are some really beautiful metaphors in this poem. i love the story this poem told. it was tragic. but you penned it wonderfully. keep writing


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Good rhyme, too bad you didn't get a trophy in the contest. I'd recommend some spelling and punctuation check, though.


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Thanks!
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nice
i like the way it just turns 180 degrees.





