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Poetic Windows

My eyes are heavy tonight
As is my heart
And I read your words of melancholy
And wrap them around me
Like a blanket of despair

Sweet disposition
And smirking eyes of disobedience
I draw your face within my mind
As I read the poetic beauty
Finding elegance in the pain

It's hard to imagine you
The burning tears that rip
Tearing into your very soul
My own empathy
Brings me to my knees

I drown in your sorrows
Devouring poetic device
As I watch with wide and curious eyes
Looking into the window  you offer me
This insight to your world

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  • Nature Song silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Poetic poetry, I trace yoru face in my mind. Hiding back the tears of pain. WE have all been there my friend. Love sucks when it doesn't go well. ~Sie