And wombman came into being
from the side
of an alien creature
and found him,
attractive
and interesting
the feminine force
had realized material existence
as it arose
from the dust of the Earth
and became sentient
in its universality
Nature had brought the 'Mother'
into being
She drew from 'him'
his life force
his understanding
and even his love
She grew in the feminine wisdom and understanding
and became the first woman
with the 'curse of blood'
with the live giving flow
of scarlet release
sustained by Luna's pull
Generations could be sustained
and its been hell on Earth ever since.
A contest entry
- & all the pretty flowers in the dust ♥ by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended December 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is definitely different. I love the play on words in the first line, and it only gets better as it goes on. You have a great vocab
Very well done & thanks for entering 
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This a very outspoken prose, telling the truth about most females...LOL The write shows your talent and excellent word use....write on!novy
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interesting write Otter.
but ya know we wouldnt have 'em any other way -
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You caught me on this one!
I was just finishing it and having fun. Now name the poem that you would like a comment on. You have my attention!
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