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Be My Valentine

Oh, Please

♥ Be my valentine 

Will you dear?

♥ Love now, 

Always,

Ever

 

Besides, 

I want your,

Body, soul and

♥ Intimate kisses! 

 Gimme all ya got baby 

♥ Go all the way, 

 Get down

Do it!


Author notes

Never written DP before! This is a first effort! What do you think, folks?

The inspiration for this little poem was a valentine I wrote in the shape of a "heart." The top section of this poem is that original poem, but I added some heart emoticons!

"Darkwell is Dirty Pretty"

The Mata Hari photo is from Wikipedia(I think)! 

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  • Darkwell
    November 10, 2008

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    it really is beautiful and full of passion Hearts and Diamonds what else could a girl ask for? ♥ i love that the first part is a pretty message and the second part gets a little dirty too