N early bare, Mother Nature shakes
O ff the last of her summer jewels.
V eering away, she leaves the Sun's embrace.
E mitting emotions of cold, steel rain;
M urky, moody, grey skies and
B iting, blue breezes:
E nds her emerald
R omance with the radiant Sun.
Author notes
November in Michigan
A contest entry
- November Acrostics Contest by Barbara.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Outstanding
probably the best acrostic poem i've ever read. Great job
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A very nice little piece and it is the same here in the UK in November. Well done
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Excellent
Wow a cold November. Ours has been so HOT. I'm ready for some rain. Excellent acrostic as always. You are very good at writing these I must admit. This is a excellent poem and best wishes in the contest. Oh and your imagery is fabulous darling!!
Blessings,
Love and Hugs,
Kelle Marie
ps just trying to get caught up on returning the favor to my wonderul friends....
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I can relate to this as I grew up in Michigan.
I live in Ohio now which is very similar, COLD! BRRRR. You did a great job on this! Blessings, Patty
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Great job on saying goodbye to the summer, I can't wait to see how you say hello to the spring... haha
Thanks for sharing this with me and good luck in the contest...
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Sorry! I missed the note telling me that I had another entry!!
Brrr.. chilly poem. And today was *very* chilly, so this fits right in! "B iting, blue breezes" ... yep. that's November!
One thing, though...no need to put a space between the first letter and the rest of the word... makes it kind of hard to read at times.
Thank you for entering, and good luck in the contest.
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nice job on this its saying goodbye to the summer and hello to winter freezing just thinking about it
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This sounds like November for us also it is the start of freezing and it only gets worse thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well
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Love it
I love your play on words for this. This is really awesome.
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