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Words and Doors

New doors opening,
shutting old ones.

Old ones you wish to not remember.

Old ones that bring back horrible memories.

New ones open to new possibilities.

New ones can be shut,
without the words,
that keep us healed.

And not bleeding....

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  • McRae by nature
    November 24, 2008

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    "without the words,
    that keep us healed.

    And not bleeding...."

    I really liked the way that you ended this piece.

    Thanks,
    Carrie


  • Emms17
    November 11, 2008
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    wow, I like it its so good