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My beautiful sorrowful memory

I heard the angels singing
A melancholy melodious song

I thought they were calling to me as they sang

So I dressed in First chair best and
grabbed my violin to play

I traveled to the highest peak
to play for the angels near

But on arriving the mountain top
the angels I could no longer hear

As I silently stood
with my bow at my side
listening to the wind
seeing the vast world before me
I realized it was not the angels who were singing or calling me to play

It was memories of my own anguish whispering in the wind
It was my own thoughts calling
To release you the only way you could understand

So I will give you a beautiful song, a  beautiful song of goodbye and I will name it
after you - my beautiful, sorrowful memory




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  • cindyloo
    November 10, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This has such vivid imagery. You have done a brilliant job with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.

    • mischivousmile
      November 10, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thanks for reading and commenting. I saw the picture and had an idea in my head, but wasn't quite sure where to go with it. Thank you again, it is so appreciated!