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Wisdom

Winds of change forever blow
Ignite spirits from deep within
Search for all we don't know
Despair awaits to reign again
Opposing forces steal the show
Maybe now's the time we begin

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The process of gaining wisdom is long and painful
especially for those slow learners like me.

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    November 11, 2008

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    Excellent

    Aye, I understand your comment. A very fine write. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • AmazinJason
    November 10, 2008
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    inciting


  • Dark Otter
    November 10, 2008
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    I like your little ditty!

    Something resonates rightly in it. It seems like good philosophy to me.