There is nothing more breath taking then a full moon in all of her glory
Hidden darken mist crescent moons makes the sky more mysterious
Each night has hidden glories that we by pass daily
The fence is what we ignore or can not claim
The most glorious skies is free to all to see
Watching a sun rise makes one feel alive
It get the blood a pumping
Each day one color or the other comes out brighter
Some days it looks like it was painted just for us
Do we truly take the time to love and appreciate
All that she gave freely did not ask a dime from us
Nor did she or he consult us when they were building this wonderful world
A contest entry
- full moon by sailor ptolema.
400 points, ended November 14, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is beautiful, I am lost in the beauty of the moon always, what a glorious creation it is. Best to you fine Bandit
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should be : "glorious skies are free"
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Very Good.
I like how you express her ways, and dive into the depth of unknown thoughts that might twirl around in a universe so vast. Thanks for sharing sis, love brother Timothy
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This is a beautiful poem extolling the beauty of nature that we take for granted or are often too busy to pay attention to. Your keen eye and your poets pen make a wonderful combination. Thanks for sharing, best of luck in the contest.
Dennis
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