Without you my heart feels empty,
Sometimes the fun things that
We did are just a memory,
But I don't care if you're with Matt.
My one concern is that you're safe,
Not saying that I want you back.
I only want to see your face.
I won't let some one give you flack.
I just want you to be cared for.
Needing some one to make you glad,
I think that you deserve much more,
Some one that won't make you sad.
I'll be your shield from the attack.
Being friends means a lot to me.
Something happens, I've got your back.
Look at my heart and you will see.
Know that I'll always be your friend.
I would do anything for you.
I'll fight for you until the end.
Look in my eyes and know it's true.
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Ryan79
3. Tell a story about someone, or something, that you lost, and how it affected you, or how you took it.
A contest entry
- Crazy Random Happinstance by peregrin.
1000 points, ended December 7, 2008, 24 entries
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I loved it
Yes I have told a story exactly like that a Letter you never read is mine so I feel you pain great job
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Fallen
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Nice message.
Ryan, I'm reading your love poems. They're making me sad, and little jealous. I feel so stupid.
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wonderful.
thats all i can say besides i loved it
good job and keep it up
~love sundry
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What a great way to write about losing someone you greatly cared about...
Thanks for entering Darling,
=)
Gwen
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this is a very sweet poem. reminds me of a Journey song...seperate ways...I hope she hears you and reads b/t the lines..Good job
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Wouldn't we all love to have a friend like that; many people say it, but when the push comes to the pull, they fade away into the shadows and cease to exist despite all their promises. Yours sounds like you wouldn't though; I hope not
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This is another poem that I call "a slice of life". You have a wonderful command of the sad genre. I truly do wish the best for you and your friend.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow ryan. i loved this poem. Thanks for spacing it by the way. i love reading your poems. keep up the good work.
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This is really beautiful the way you expressed your emotions here. i know how you feel and this poem is very relatable. Great Write
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this is really good, it reminds me of my friend matt (which i think ironic cause you used that name in your poem), you have captured a feeling beautifully here, i love it
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Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it. I just had to write it out to get it out of my head. I feel better now. Now I just need to share it with the person who inspired me to write it.
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wow ryan. this poem was so heartfelt and honest. it took my breath away and i loved the sense of love and the imagery balanced this out perfectly. awesome write and keep it up! i enjoy reading your poetry ryan; they are so emotional and heartfelt.
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