Scattered leaves amongst the trees,
White snow blanketing the skies,
A single soul frozen in time,
Lost in the beauty of the scene.
A crescent moon and single star,
Catch my eyes and I lose focus,
Walking forward but staring up,
I quickly stumble off the trail.
Now two souls caught up in nature,
Find one another while finding beauty,
The world begins to fade away,
As the snow surrounds and love is captured.
A contest entry
- & all the pretty flowers in the dust ♥ by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended December 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think.
Comments
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This is quite a lovely poem and, while I'm not usually one for the sappy, romantic stuff, I had to say that this was very well-done. Thanks for entering & good luck to you
Laura
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thanks
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interesting take on the prompt...everyone seems to take it somewhere else...well done! and good luck
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i really like "catch my eyes and i lose focus".
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