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Hatred

Fist to fist,
won't happen again,
I'm sorry,
It ended like this.

A contest entry

I need a title for this

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    very nice take on this prompt here i think you did a very great excellent job here good luck to you in the contest


  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008

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    smart write!

    It is hard to hold back when we get our dander up, but even better when we realize and ask for forgiveness. Good luck in life and this contest! The Shaker