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Far Spaces

A black and white prairie- did it ever exist?
Did anyone but the lonesome traveler
who when happened upon it said,
"It appears I am lost", reside in its space?

A black and white prairie- is there a place more vacant?
Even the bird flying near remarks,
"I have reached the end so I must turn back."
Too afraid to pass through something so foreign.

A black and white prairie- is nobody there?
Or do its inhabitants lie cold beneath the ground,
living only in some distant time?
Did they leave anything behind?

A black and white prairie- it has a place in everyones' mind.
It is the dusty record that nobody plays.
It is the dream that one denies having.
It is the beginning and the end
of everything we have ever known.

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  • alaskanamber
    November 10, 2008

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    Great subject

    This was unique. Many people write about love and hate, god and fate. You wrote about the whatifs and hasbeens in life and it came together very well.