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no end

Missing image





No water so deep
as God's promise ~

that I shall swim
upon his palm

and when there's nothing left
beneath well worn feet
I'll float
on angel's breath and light

finding that tiny split in the sky
and a face
I've always known...


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  • Samplette gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    A stunning and beautiful write. I love the inspiration you received from the picture. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Nom de Plume
    November 23, 2008
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    Wonderful poem... as if touched.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 13, 2008

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    Wow...this is beautiful.





  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Just lovely! I wish my faith could serve me as well as yours does... this is so uplifting!


  • Malabu
    November 10, 2008
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    beautifully written

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