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The TreeFort !

The Treefort


W. Peter Sanci Nov. 10 / 2008


Well hello again my dear friends.
I come to you tonight with another
Humble offering.
I’m sure that most of you know what a treefort is.
My dad made my brother and I one up at the cottage many, many years ago now.
It was in the back lot, away from all of the action by the lake.
My brother and I would head up there shortly after breakfast and not come down till we heard the sound of the dinner gong.
That’s right we had a dinner gong at  the cottage.
Well Mike (my little brother’s name of course would pretend all day up in our little piece of pardise.
We would be King Arthur and his Knights of that Round Table in Legendary Camelot.
We would pretend to be General George Custer and theMighty Chief Sitting Bull.
Oh the many many joyful hours we spent up in that old tree fort.
I started thinking of it when we were on our Thanksgiving Day hay ride where up in a tree I spotted an old treefort, and it transported me back in time to our old fort up at the cottage.
What pleasant memories they did bring me that day.
The End

Author notes

Hi again, I jjust had to write this poem about my littel brohers and my treefort! It brought back a lot of great childhood memories.I hope you all enjoy my poem.

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  • mystic-angel
    November 11, 2008

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    What a wonderful memory! Oh the joy of treeforts and the innocence of childhood a lovely mixture. Thanks for your entry and good luck.

    • Pietro456
      November 14, 2008
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      Sandy !

      Yuu alwayssay the nicest hhings abut my peoms ! How the heck are you ! How come you're not on chat any more ?

    • Pietro456
      November 14, 2008
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      Dusty Tiger !

      Why thanks so much fo r you're kind remarks about my poem. Hey are you as cute as you are in you're picture ?

    • Pietro456
      November 14, 2008
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      Mystic Angel !

      Hi and thanks for you're great comment ! It is actually a tue story . Again thanks so much.

  • Pietro456
    November 10, 2008
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    Anotjher Great One !

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