Slipping...
Forgotten...
Fallening...
Left...
Why does it always happen to me?
This feeling of mine
It threatens to just engulf me
To consume my entire being
Reaching...
Loved...
Grabing...
Here...
Cluching onto what is left
I cling to my feeling of being wanted
It threatens to dissappear
Forever into nothing
Hoping...
Cluching...
Light...
Seizing...
Please tell me what you think
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Sparse, but potent piece of poetry here, with a universal appeal--love... most deftly done with a good use of short lines which is not always easy to do... bravo.
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Wow! AMAZING! Very effective use of layout. And its legible which is so nice... i hate reading things i have to highlight..
sorry.. Great words really. 
nice job
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whoa...
I is speechless...
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its amazing! great work! just amazing! woot woot!
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Cluching onto what is left
I cling to my feeling of being wanted
It threatens to dissappear
Forever into nothing
this is a really good stanza, and i enjoyed reading the rest of the poem. i like the layout and the way you wrote the 4 different words with following eplipses. a very good write.
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My favorite lines:
Cluching onto what is left
I cling to my feeling of being wanted
It threatens to dissappear
Forever into nothing
This poem gots good emotion and good imagery in it, Good write keep up the good work.
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Deep words...
We always have that need, of being wanted... whoever says he/she doesn't, is a liar...
In a certain way, that's what keeps us living.
Loved the poem.
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i love it.. amazing
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