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Sometimes it's just necessary

I've had many disappointments in my life time
that another would not be a surprise.
It may break or shred my heart
but it's what I'm
anticipating...



if only I drank Moxie...

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  • dx d by me
    November 11, 2008
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    I suppose the world would be a different place if we all had some! Geo


  • Yemassee gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Ah, that's what we were talking about!

    Stealing from John Greenleaf Whittier:

    For of all sad words of tongue or pen,
    The saddest are these: "It might have been!"


    The saddest thing imaginable is to have had the chance to drink Moxie, but to have never taken it.

    Are you anticipating a broken heart...Moxie will never break your heart...it might make you violently ill but it won't break your heart.

    I still have no idea what we're talking about...but that isn't anything new for me.

    • Reset Button
      November 11, 2008

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      I'm not expecting a broken heart. I'm packing and found some old poetry that just happened to fit what we were...talking about. lol I never know what I'm talking about. I'm tooooo ADHD to keep a firm grip on any thought. Thanks for the smiles though! You're right too. Moxie is never a disappointment.