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You Want Me Forever?

You want me, you want me forever
How long is forever?
Does forever lasts after the first kiss?
Does it last after the lovemaking mist?
Does it stays or fades with trying days?
Whatever you have in mind
Forever is a long time
I will take my steps slowly
For you can show me
That you can fight the wind
That blows you want me forever, again.

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