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[ I still remember ]

I still remember
How I felt
On the precious day
That you made my heart melt.

You were perfectly perfect
As far as I could see.
I was delighted to know
That you belonged to me.

I was never afraid
Nor did I regret that I had you.
Even when others said
That being a teenage mom was a hard thing to do.

You changed my life in so many ways.
I can't even begin to count
For it would take days.

I know it's my job each day
To teach you something new. But I must admit that
The one who does the most teaching is you.

Because of you, I now know
All of the important things
A person needs to truly grow.

A contest entry

About my daughter. I'm sure I could do better, it's been a while.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    I like this. I was a young mom also 20 at the of her birth but she changed my life so much for the better and I don't know where I would be without her thank you for your entry into my contest good luck.