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"I Wish"

You can't just put "I wish"
before something to make it come true.
You have to want it and work for it
and never give up until your through.

You can't build a house
without any blueprints,
without hard work,
you won't make a dent.

You can't go to the moon
without the long ride,
but never forget,
time is always on your side.

You cant write a book
without an outline,
just work for your dreams,
and you'll do just fine.


Keep your mind focused,
and your eyes on the prize,
if you do those simple things,
to the top you will rise.

Author notes

wow. it was a lot better in my head. oh well.

major editing to be done going to add and take out some stanzas

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  • Deserted heart
    December 3, 2008

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    It wasn't bad out of your head either. Simple, straight to the point, and with marvelous flow. Great write and truth in words.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    EXcellent write

    So true are your words and never give up no matter what others say for the great ones walk to their own drum beat