current drawn through wire
pushed the stretched to tone
falling under; rising over
waves drift on long and calm
oceans swell and fall in rain again
never stopping pulsing
of the synthesizer song
Author notes
Rick Wright died September 15 2008
He played keyboard in Pink Floyd
HE wrote the Great Gig in the Sky
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Enwnt7-j90k
A contest entry
- it's quickie-time! by Immortal Obscurity.
500 points, ended November 10, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can you tell what I'm thinking so I know you understand?
Comments
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I really like this; good flow and image. I read it a second time aloud; it has a sweet sound and smooth rythm. The drawn through wire--stretched to tone and then going to waves, ocean swell and rain is very well crafted and intelligently composed.
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the imagery you have created. the words that over flow. you can just see one mulling over the keys. thanks for sharing.
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Nice ode to a great muscian.
Mike -
Nice poem with good flow, fantastic job, a tribute to the death of a special person, best of luck...
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While your chosen topic didn't really relate to the prompt, I can see what you were getting at. Well done, and thanks for entering
Laura
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