Ghastly images torment my mind
leaving me cold and insensitive
noone dares to utter your name
yet I hear it 24/7
and I long for silence....
lifelessy I move on
to a world that's unknown
Author notes
Prompt -
"Your name dances on my lips,
like a funeral song
I'd rather forget the lyrics to." -Laura VBS
7 lines
A contest entry
- it's quickie-time! by Immortal Obscurity.
500 points, ended November 10, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What a prompt! And what's even more amazing is your take on it. This was a stunning write. Congratulations on the Bronze
Much love
Ylova
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to know that inside our heads, its never a quite place.
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Best wishes. This is beautiful..
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Beautiful job, I love ypur poem, I hope you win. Best of Luck...
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Very good. I like this. I think it is true to the quote. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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"noone dares to utter your name
yet I hear it 24/7
and I long for silence...."
It's true that, even when someone has disappeared from your life, they will always be in your memory... I will attest to that. Great take on the prompt, and thanks for entering
Laura
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awesomeness
best of luck
Tasha
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