You said you told me the truth,
you didn't.
You said that you were my friend,
you lied.
You used me,
now look how I ended up.
You have crossed the line,
way to many times.
The truth is know reveled.
You know what you are.
Why did you have to do it.
You had such a great future.
You just threw it away.
You could have just told me.
I would have tried to stop you.
Now that you have done it,
there can be no more.
You have no right to call me friend,
you know what you have done.
You reveled to truth to everyone.
Just look what you've become.
A contest entry
- Friends old and new by melphleg.
700 points, ended November 20, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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This is sad. It expresses much anger. I hope and pray the friendship can be reconciled. It is awful when any friendship ends, and yet sometimes it is necessary.
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wow.. NICE!


