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Heart of Gold

To them I am callous and cold.
I am the heartless one.
My heart no one can behold,
except him: my emmett, my lover and my friend.

I feel the pity surrounding me,
coming from my family.
They know why I disagree.
Why I voted no,
when she asked me.

I didn't want this,
I wouldn't have asked for it.
It is because of Carlisle that I exist,
though I will never blame him for what he did.

How could she throw it all away?
Everything I have ever wanted,
a child of my own,
to feel blood running through my veins.
How could she freely give that away?

To them I am callous and cold.
I wish I could be something better,
than what everyone thinks of me.
I wish my heart of gold,
the one those men stole from me so long ago,
could replace this heart inside of me now,
that has grown feelingless and cold.

Author notes

I wrote this for ONE of my favorite characters in the Twilight Saga, Rosalie.

It is prior Breaking Dawn.
I guess this could considered Option 8, the conflict is between Rosalie and Bella because of Bella's "need" to be a vampire or it could be Option 2: Rosalie is the character.

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    November 30, 2008

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    Off and on, off and on. I get it yet I don't. But, it was a good poem from Rosalie's point of view. Nice job Good luck


  • Missa
    November 11, 2008
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    great! that seems exactly was rosalie was feeling! good luck.


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    November 10, 2008

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    wow different choice. Good Choice nice to see one not about bella or jacob or Edward.
    Good Luck,
    Sarah