you are my friend
holding my hand and laughing
under the warmth of the sun
sharing smiles
playing on carefree days
I seek you, to make such memories
when the sky grows dark
and the air is chilled
will you stay with me
and hold my hand
if i cry or will you sit,
and comfort me in silence
I offer my shoulder
as a home
for your pain
my arms
an embrace to share
your hurt and joy
I am your friend
in this journey
celebrating your successes
lifting you as you fail
reminding you, you remain the same
wonderful soul I love
you are my friend
aware, I am flawed
and have fallen
but still
you see my beauty
and show me, I am loved
A contest entry
- Friends old and new by melphleg.
700 points, ended November 20, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent x2
The words and truth
are more beautiful then I remember
Your mind is so easy to admire in this verse
The ending is perfect Michelle
Love Rick -
This is very touching indeed. I don't think I need to say more than that. Congratulations on the silver.
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excellent~
This is beautiful
Bob is such a wonderful person and friend
You penned this so nice for him
Congrats on the Silver Trophy
I won Honorable Mention so we both won
I hope you come pay me a visit as well
Love the background where did you find it
Nice to meet you as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Wow. I really loved this. It describes such warmth and love and intimacy. You have captured many of the qualities of friendship from playing to sharing pain. Bravo!
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Thank you Bob for your kind comment, the silver and your friendship, I am honored! I am so glad you liked this!
Blessings and love,
Michelle
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Excellent x2
you are my friend
aware, I am flawed
and have fallen
but still
you see my beauty
and show me, I am loved
How touching Michelle
Totally beautiful
Love Ya, Rick
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So lovely is this tribute to friend, there is no greater blessing than a true friend.
Light and Love
Robert
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Lovely! Such a touching side of friendship - deep and honest. Very dedicated.
Love your wording!
best wishes in your contest.
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So beautiful Sis...a friend like you is a blessing rich and rare!
Love you~
Sue
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