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Fly away to a happy place

Fly away with me!
I'll teach you to fly!
Fly away with me!
To a place where you are loved
Leave this cold world today
A place where push comes to shove.
Come with me
And stay a while.
I'll keep you warm
And I'll make you smile.
I'll make you laugh
Like yesterday never happened
Nothing miserable
Nothing sad.
Just laughter and companions.
Fly away with me
To a happy place
Where everyone loves you
And would give you the world!
Laughter is good,
So I'll tell a joke
That makes you laugh for a year!
I'll tickle you so much
You'll be in tears!
Unless you don't like to be tickled...
Then we'll find something else to do.
You'll be so happy
You won't know what to do!
So come
Come and see
I won't disappoint you.
Come see,
There's a big blue sky
Waiting for you to
Fly away with me.

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  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Beautifully penned !

    I really love this poem. It is so bright, cheery and made me feel like I wanted to come and fly with you to your 'Happy Place' Very well done and I wish you well in this contest


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    November 12, 2008
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    i LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!! ((sorry...stupid caps!))