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I
Love
Christmas
It’s the best and
Happiest time of the year
Jesus Christ or Santa Claus
All the days are filled with cheer
Children laughing and running about
Waiting for presents and knowing their
Loved their Parents are talking in whispers
Sneaking around and hiding presents here and
There singing Christmas carols and decorating the
Tree everyone hearts filled with glee going to their
Family’s house Mom and Grandma cooking Christmas
Dinner Dad and Grandpa watching football on TV all of
The kids playing with all of their new things what’s not to
Love Christmas is the greatest time of the year it’s all about
Being happy and it comes at the end of the year and it’s always
Filled with cheer so I guess you can be a Scrooge I think that is
Up to you but for me I’m going to have fun I hope I’m not the only
One so I’d just like to say Merry Christmas and God Bless you all
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By Hardluck
Author notes
Merry Christmas, This should look like a Christmas Tree.
What do I need to do to make it better?
Comments
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Wonderful Poem
What as delight to read your poem. And the form of a tree just adds to the magic of your poem. So many memories to recall. Thank you for sharing this with us. Hope the holidays are merry and bright. Blessings to you.
Take care,
Sandy
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Outstanding
I'm a huge fan of Christmas - it is my favourite time of the year and I loved how you made this poem into the shape of a Christmas tree. I liked the way you set the scene with well-chosen details that brought Christmas to life and reminded me of the good times. My suggestion for improvement would be to add some punctuation to make it easier for the reader to follow. This shouldn't be too difficult to do. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
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I love this poem, it is so cheery, I like how you made this poem into what is called a shape poem. I studied that last year and am surprised I remember what it is lol. anyway wonderful job. And Merry Christmas...
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