they plug me in
because i am just a machine
that relies on artificial life
to live.
they plug me in
because i can do for them
something that they want
but ive run out of batteries.
they plug me in
because i can bring them
somewhere else
but i cant do it alone.
i need them.
they just use me.
but cut off my power...
cut me off from what i need...
its okay.
i wont die.
because you can just revive me when
you want to use me again.
Author notes
lol first thing i saw: like a million wires that i have no idea wut theyre for but im pretty sure theyre important
A contest entry
- What you first see by Seaquince.
450 points, ended November 11, 2008, 9 entries
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that the mechine your a human dream :)
brillent i really like it were do you get your thoughts are they from real expernce if so woa
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lol yep real experience. my poems are me. its all really just the same poem. just different choice of words and a different day
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This is so light yet at the same time deep very well written. Authors comment really made me laugh.
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yaya ^_^
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the first thing i see is this laptop
but its filtered by such fucking innumerable thoughts
i think i might just be lying to me.
i mean why not jump on the bandwagon.
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haha lol even ur comments are philosophical
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lol
i ws in a weird mood
i didnt know right from wrong for like 20 minutets
andu happened to get a comment
while i was thinking
like that
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lol ur a weird mood
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firstly i loved your author note it make me smile and understand your poem on 2 levels...
i enjoyed the read and i am sure many of us have wires that are either unplugged from life and some plugged far to long into emotions.... both needing a change or upgrade...
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yupp! thank u for ur comment and for ur awesome contest idea! it caught me a little off guard lol
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