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One Day I'll soon be Free

    Though these memories are cut deep
One day I'll soon be free and forget all of our troubles
I feel no longer bound to you, so every passing day as you push
I will no longer follow like I once did.

    One day I'll soon be free and forget all of our laughs
Our stories and running words, that had lost their meaning with the days
I now know of traps your people lay and have a better eye for them
I'll tread more carefully this time.


  One day I'll soon be free and forget all of  our adventures
that we were able to survive over the seasons.
The ones that kept us together and were able to share with the others
I'll be able to run free on my own without you.


  One day I'll soon be free and forget those promises
That clearly ment nothing, and always will.
Why give breath to an instrument that plays no song
That was my mistake.


  And one day I'll soon be free
And be with the one Odin ment for me
Now I have opened my eyes
And soon, one day I'll be free.

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  • ashleighjessica
    November 10, 2008

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    i like how you always go back to one day you'll be free. it shows what your passion about, your poem tells a story of how you know that someday a head of you that you will be ok. and set free. nice job