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Rippling Years

clear blue pond water
reflects another year –
ripples flowing out

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kurgle

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 6
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    Terrific imagery and wonderful haiku

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 11, 2008
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    Wonderful visuals along with metaphoric usage. Delightful to read. Good luck in the contest!


  • DogFish silver member
    November 10, 2008
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    clear blue pond water
    reflects another year –
    ripples flowing out

    ...like the rings of a tree!