On a road to nowhere
but I don't care
got my vibes on easy
and I'm swaying
Playing tunes in my mind,
soaring through the clouds
like eagles on wine
I'm drifting on the memory of you,
floating on that cottoncandy love
No place I'd rather be
than in your arms
Look at me I'm flying
This trip is so exciting
Let all heaven sing
as we ride on this symphony,
in the sky on lovers wings
Because I'm on a road to nowhere,
but I don't even care
got my vibes on easy
and I'm swaying,
through this blissful
paradise of you
of you, of you
you you you you
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XII by Samplette.
1800 points, ended November 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sounds like some beautiful lyrics to me. Very nicely written. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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I liked the way you have written this and really found it used a lot of your feelings and emotions answering the picture well with true feelings that people could relate to. very well written something that makes you stop and think it stretches beyond a poem and could easily be turned into a song. Really strong with feelings that reflect the picture. Absolutely amazing write for this competition.
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Hey baby,
embolden your type font so we can see it better.
The contrast is cloudy.
Honeybunches
Thought I'd throw that in there. . lol
I sure love this new writing thing that's happening to you.
Really clear and the feelings can easily be discerned.
Absolutely wonderful entry for this prompt.
Best wishes love,
jin
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awesome
chock full of imagery and dreamy visuals to keep one's mind afloat of happy moments!
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oh yes
I like it very much , I thought I had replied sorry, read more of your work I also like very much -
How magical!! This is such a breath of sweetly fresh air!
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Beautiful
This is so human in its' approach. I like how the road is a metaphor for memory lane. We all take the trip down that road when we let our minds wander.
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