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by our own hand.

brick by brick
we pave
the path towards our ruin

mile by mile
we march
towards the inevitable

year by year
we elevate
the fever

foot by foot
we melt
the ice

day by day
we destroy
our forests

inch by inch
we inundate
our oceans

hour by hour
we bleed
our planet dry

minute by minute
we annihilate
our home

second upon second
i ask
when
will
it
stop
.

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