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Katie in love!

Once there was a Princess,
named Katie.

She was in love with a Knight named
Sir Hunter.

Who really was a blunter!

Katie watch in awe
as Hunter laughed "HA!"

Hunter never noticed Katie,
Katie thought will he notice me when I'm eighty?

One day when Katie was watching him
Hunter decided to sing a hyme.

KAtie decided to flirt,
but Hunter just made a loud Burp!

SO there it is,
never love Hunter

Author notes

OPtion #4, i guess it may not fit, and I do not think writing "Cicada" here is much perpose it makes more work for me and I HATE IT!

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  • SmartBrick
    November 25, 2008

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    "INSULTING!" she said,"Now every one will know I'm in love with him!"...Tooooooo bad they already knew! =]


  • careless courtney
    November 15, 2008
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    tehehehe! i like it!!!!....poor hunter...hes BRAINLASS


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    November 12, 2008
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    It fit perfectly!

  • SmartBrick
    November 11, 2008
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    LOL!So I saw the color, and I'm all like, this must be an ok poem!Then I read KT in ,an I'm all like...ahoo boy!Turned out good!

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