love, I drank thee in
your voice electrified me
your touch seared my flesh
sparks across bare skin cascade
lost, in Tantric ecstasy
Author notes
looainf contol all he has to do is speak
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Adult only (Pictures) by Riftkin.
800 points, ended November 12, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Control by Girl With Guitar.
700 points, ended February 18, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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That picture is awesome.
I like this, I feel raw connection and that's an amazing thing to feel, especially through a poem.
Best of luck and thank you for the entry. -
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My humble thanks
I am flatterd
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like this poem.. very steamy
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thank you
thank you
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This so short, sweet, sensual it gives a vivid & beautiful picture...matching the photo divinely....because love is divine....excellent...Novy
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thank you
my heart felt thanks
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mmmm..
deliciously seductive write!
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mmmmmm
thank you she replied coyly
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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k that's it too much heat tonight gonna have to look for another man sheesh
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it is monday
hot and heavy and all with a phone call, \i am smitten for sure, love you sis
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Yes
softly. Gently. Passionately.
with elicit winds of sultry pleasure
I bask in the favor of your love.
Rolling in imprints of sand that
sign your name in the timeless rhapsody
of your love. We thrash against the
seashore of passion with each splash
of raging tides. Fulfilled by the
enchantment of an intoxicated sea.
Lovely poem. My comment is a dedication
to which you were the inspiration
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yes
umm my toes are curling
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short and to the point
You have to feel it to know what it's about. Fine!
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feel
yes feel , thank you so much
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