Scattered emotions
Running rampant going no where
Unable to interpret my thoughts
Everywhere I look perplexity
I’m lost with no where to turn
I can’t find my way
Mist crowding me in
Shrouding my vision I can’t see
Where do I go from here
A road stretching on forever
I’m afraid no one to care
I’m here, right here can’t you see
A place I have no desire to be
What has changed I don’t know
Bombarded with uncertainty
What is to become of me
As the sun rise to another day
I’ve always been here and here I am
And yet each day I awake
No one can see the real me
On the outside I function brilliantly
The façade erodes more each day
Smiling with boundless cheer
As confusion is my delusion
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XII by Samplette.
1800 points, ended November 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely write. I think many of us can relate to this piece. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to comment it is greatly appreciated. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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I like this one the best as I think it really fulfills the contest brief well. I have to agree with you sometimes this life can seem very confusing. I like your work.
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Thank you so much I am honored by the praise of your comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Interesting look at the picture, very well written with great imagination and metephor.
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I don't really know if my thoghts captured the picture but it's what popped in my head and I usually go with that. LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and for leaving a comment too God Bless, Jo-Ann
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