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Waterfalls

Waterfalls
natures staircase
to heaven.

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It is actually shorter than 5 lines. I hope that is okay.

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  • thoughtsforu
    November 10, 2008

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    What a beautiful way to get to the gates of heaven dear poet. Never imagined a waterfall as a staircase but your words put alot of meaning to it. Good luck in the contest.


    • trekkergirl
      November 11, 2008
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      glad that you liked my waterfall poem. Thanks for commenting on it.

  • SoulWhispher
    November 10, 2008

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    Well done, you have said a lot in a short space, I found this most profound, great job, blessings John


  • Meroza
    November 10, 2008

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    Make this one good, I love waterfalls: http://invisiblewl.deviantart.com/art/Waterfall-14853552
    You may ask for another photo if you wish

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