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Fire lily

A fierce sight that catches the eye.
A vision of an blazing beauty.
Captivating within its wilds.
Untamed splendor,
that I have ever found.   

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My prompt was : http://i-magine.deviantart.com/art/fire-lilly-21371829

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Gorgeous Imagery!!!


  • Swan song gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    Done with a clear and precise vision


  • greeny
    November 18, 2008
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    simplicity makes beauty, i really love this one..
    keep it up!!


  • tara wilson gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    'Untamed splendor'

    I love that...a good write=)


  • Room without doors gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Outstanding

    The imagery is intense and captures something of the beauty of these flowers. I liked your choice of language and the images you chose to describe it. The poem provides a perfect compliment to the picture. Best of luck in the contest.


  • chilali
    November 11, 2008

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    Awesome take on the prompt. Well done Best to you in the contest


  • Guerrero
    November 10, 2008
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    you tried and succeeded its great!


  • Meroza
    November 10, 2008

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    Well, here is your prompt: http://i-magine.deviantart.com/art/fire-lilly-21371829
    You may ask for a new one if you wish

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