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Two Days In

Two days in
And my body feels cold
I don't want to die
I just want to grow old
With you

Not a razor blade in sight
But something's wrong
Cause my arms are bleeding
Every sad song

Since last night
I cried in fear
As sadness rolled in
And your voice
Fell away from me
With every sliding tear

So I wiped away those tears
I forced myself to smile
Five more days Feel more like years
And I'm tempted to walk those miles

I just want to hear you smile
I just want to see your face
So hold me close
Don't let go or I'll break


Though it won't be long
I die again

Author notes

I could've gone on and on with this one, but I made myself stop..lol. I didn't want to cry too long.

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  • SoulfulBubbles
    November 16, 2008

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    heh Damn i relate so much to this one it hurts
    except instead of days its 2 years

    >.<


    XD (105 days left hell freaking yes on a stick ) XDD

    wellll anyyy whooo
    in short i like it! and i am going to read the others XD


  • starving4perfection
    November 12, 2008
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    its very well written i lovedd it


  • Guerrero
    November 10, 2008
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    its beautiful... *hugs* im always here