Glory breathed;
a frosty zephyr
Silken touches,
on a solitary cabin..
embracing warmth
Coal black mirages
Ivory peaks,
glistened
on horizon
Silhouetted trees and
Frozen waterfalls
cascade..
mossy gorges
Crystal eyelids
danced...
Winter attire clinging to
delicate porcelain..
Hands tickled
at his touch..
Winter was indeed
their season..
To love,
.........to be one
Author notes
AP Name: Alyzeh
Prompt: Winter, 50 words
Photo Credits: Valleyillusions.com
A contest entry
- 50 words: Winter by whiterabbit..
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Time to upgrade those green shinies again! by Nicada.
1000 points, ended December 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very beautiful imagery is shared here, and you did quite well bringing winter to a lovely life, with only fifty words. Very nice, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Wonderful imagery as always.
Love the ending..very touching.
A very beautiful poem.
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This is beyond beautiful. You certainly paint a lovely picture of winter here. This should be framed and placed upon my wall, so I can always enjoy winter. The imagery is perfect.
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Amazing
You never fail me with your elegance of words
Silhouetted trees and
Frozen waterfalls
cascade..
mossy gorges
Stunning imagery
Loved it all
Best wishes in the contest hun
Julie x
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wow, you took this prompt with storm, well done!
Good luck!
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Crystal eyelids
danced...
Winter attire clinging to
delicate porcelain..
Hands tickled
at his touch..
BEAUTIFUL.
Almost as lovely as you my sweet.
Best wishes in this contest, this should definitely bring you something
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Much love always,
jin
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Just beautiful.. love the images you have created with your words!
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Yay! Alyzeh has finally written something
And what a beautiful write it is. I love this. Winter is my favorite season, even though I freeze over here Dubai
But still, winter is very serene with the purity of the snow and I don't know. It is just so very magical and the imagery you have portrayed here is just amazing. The flow, yes, it was impeccable. A very heart warming write. I loved this so much. Thank you so much for sharing and this had better win in the contest!!! I know it will! It's just beyond beautiful. Well done love and good luck
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Shaweeeeeeetness
Winter was indeed
their season..
To love,
.........to be one
Brilliantly said my friend,
a winter write that brings warmth to the reader
Good luck in the contestKen
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