Fuck me baby
all night long
make it hard
and make it strong.
Nails clawing down your back
until I break the skin.
Moaning is such great delight
no baby this ain't no sin.
Whisper in my ear how tight my pussy is
and just how good it feels
as deep inside my wetness
your cock it conceals.
Take out your frustrations sexually
on this body of mine
as the ramming of your cock
sends shivers down my spine.
Make my sweet pussy raw
juicy and wanting more.
Make me your love slave baby
make me your sexual whore.
Cum deep inside me
now let me lick you clean.
Let me sip your sweetness
drink from your cock's canteen.
You wanna fuck me in the ass
as I rise on hands and knees.
You can have me anywhere you like
just fuck me baby please.
Drown me in your creamy cum
paint my body with your cock.
My body is your canvass
my nipples and clit are hard as a rock.
Sweat dripping off our bodies
windows all steamed
as your name rolls off my tongue
and over and over I screamed...
FUCK ME BABY!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW!!!
This certainly caused shivers to run up and down my spine! You have a lot of good lines here: My body is your canvas, for example! This is awesome! Raw, hot and sensual. But you have penned it well - I see things that may have this kind of sexual energy, but their authors do not capture it as well as you have.
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WOW back! thanks for the wonderful comment! These kind of writes seem to be my forte'! Glad you enjoyed the read and thanks again for the comment
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i think i need to take a very long cold shower that after reading this might not be enough, i may need to think of something better, keep it flowing, i know i will
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Generally, raw erotica, unsubtle and desensitized, falls apart rather quickly but here you use your words like a blunt instrument, pounding the contours of the theme into a tight, little anthem. it ain't a string quartet, but it does rock. it does roll. absolutely. -silverfish
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My oh my!!! This is the sexiest write I've seen outta u sis!!! Damn!!!
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This is what I call poetry...
hard demanding poetry!!!!.... -
let me sip your sweetnes---very nice indeed. u dont mince ur words. 'my body is your canvass' tells so many things to the reader.
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Fuck me!!! Raw and straight to the point,
no messing babe, loved reading Carl xxxx
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Wll I hope this one made you feel better. I know it did me. Well crafted eroticism.
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Drown me in your creamy cum
paint my body with your cock.
My body is your canvass
my favorite lines
and I will admit
I am turned on immensely.
very raw, but very titillating and emotionally lustful.
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Wow....
Well, uh...yea.
You pretty much said it all there.
Wow...just fucking wow
Great job
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My girl is back and I love it!!!!!! Great job here sis
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Thanks sis! Glad you liked it. Had to take my frustrations out! LOL
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OMG
That is sooooo hot and erotic! I love the raw emotion and need in this poem, your words come alive as I read and I can almost see and feel what you describe. I need a cold shower now.
Oh, line 29 looks like it's missing a word "drown my (what?)" or maybe you meant "drown ME".
-Garrett
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LOL! Thank you and as always I appreciate your comment and thanks for pointing that out to me! I fixed it and now should read better
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uhm..aaahhh...
hooooooollllllllyy smokiesshittzzzeee!! damn!1 l.o.l. uhm..yeahh..you can uhm write!
l.o.l. mmm...damn
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I take it you liked! Thanks for the comment! Always appreciate your feedback
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Desire...aroused...I would proudly serve
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