such a pretty boy
whose friends have come and gone
leaving him all bewildred
looking at classic films
which (not intending to bust your halloon) were also not reality
reality is hard to stomach
but keep in mind
"others have coped and even left their mark"
they must have been better tham us
or just smarter
or more gifted
but we can and should still keep trying
A contest entry
- Friends old and new by melphleg.
700 points, ended November 20, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You must have done some homework. I love classic movies. Perhaps we will be able to share conversations about Audrey, Jimmy, Cary and Katherine.
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dont know who the boy is mich but you did him proud x
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Yep. All we can do is try. Great work michi!
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