I'm down to my last cry
no more tears will fall for you
Today I will bid
my final and last adieu.
Too much is at stake
to live a life of lies
It is you and only you
that I have grown to despise.
Your constant belittling
of me and my son
every single day's the same
living a bad rerun.
What kind of father are you
to put him down every single day.
What kind of message
to him does that convey?
What kind of husband
doesn't notice his wife crying
and see the lies behind her eyes
the spark of life is dying.
We never talk anymore
such silence and tension
dare I speak a word to you
I live every day in apprehension.
What will I say today
that will cause myself pain
Spitting back insults to you
is not something I can refrain.
Do you have anything to say?
Any last words or insults
Come on now let it all out
it's just us adults.
Tell me what you really think
don't hold anything back
go ahead a launch
your verbal attack.
I get it everyday
why should you stop now
one last belittle, one for the road
go on ahead, this time I will allow.
I'm down to my last cry
from my heart you've been evicted.
Now the healing starts
from the verbal abuse you've inflicted.
Go get yourself some help
You really could use it.
Though I know that is something
that you never will admit.
Now it's time to say goodbye
I still wish you all the best.
So get your shit and go
please fulfill my one last request.
Please tell me what you think
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Now it's time to say goodbye
I still wish you all the best.
So get your shit and go
please fulfill my one last request << i loved these line shell, blunt and to the point this poem was brimming with emotion
a great write
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I have said it a lot, and it has been said by others as it is so very true, no one deserves this, especially not someone as great as you. You and your son deserve infinitely better than him!!!
This is another great poem, and another heart-wrenching one, it is a great injustice of this world (that I see replicated all to often, with so many good people) that someone such as yourself is in such a terrible position, im wishing for you, I really am
Rob
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This one tugs at the heart strings,no one deserves this,
not you and especialy, not your son.As you said what kind of father,puts his son down every day. Not a good one thats for sure!
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theres so much sadness and hurt in this write but its a good one! You need my help to pack up his shit!!!! LOL!
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OUCH!!
Hurt so much to read this very painful piece my friend, I'm sorry for your heartache. The part that is probably the most painful to read is how this clown treats his son, that will most surely come back on him down the road..and if the boy becomes a man with rage
it's a good chance he'll want an audience with 'dad'
that likely won't be pleasant for the 'so-called' father in question.
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A final and first step....
a leap of faith for happiness......
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