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Burdened



That's how I feel after your departure,
how to lose life, fear death, but afraid
to feel, to laugh, mourn in a panic
when learned to ignore my desires in pain.

Burdened with nostalgia by a wind faded,
feverish to grave a charm, sentenced unusable,
scared to horizon in surrendered despair
for a love trap forever bundled in same tangles.















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  • spiritualangel
    November 30, 2008

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    to feel, to laugh, mourn in a panic
    when learned to ignore my desires in pain.

    Burdened with nostalgia by a wind faded,
    feverish to grave a charm, sentenced unusable,

    Beautiful. Best of luck.