Dreams that crumble
tugging at the heart
the wonders of life
seem to break apart
Visions are all blurred
no clarity of love
mystical in mist
flight of white dove
Confusion abounds
what’s right and wrong
in the heart of a young man
that can’t hear the angels song
Author notes
Karl Weiss - Topaz
A contest entry
- 30-60 words Contest PIF Quickie..Picture Prompt ..56th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
650 points, ended November 30, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Visions are all blurred
no clarity of love
mystical in mist
flight of white dove
Beautifully expressed. Best of Luck. -
This is a poem that tugs at the heart. Dreams and love wrapped together.
Joann
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A wonderful poem
Full of his deep feelings and emotions
Strong thoughts
Best wishes and good luck
Julie
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Deep and beautifully written. Great take on the prompt. I wish you the best of luck.
Linda
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